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| Desiccated, dusty detritus clutters the attic. | Desiccated, dusty detritus clutters the attic. | ||
| Among them your eyes pick out a nest of hand-sewn dolls, frilly bedding, and books, perhaps the remains of a girl's hideout a century or more ago. | Among them your eyes pick out a nest of hand-sewn dolls, frilly bedding, and books, perhaps the remains of a girl's hideout a century or more ago. | ||
| - | A rocking chair rises up, draped with lacy cobwebs. | + | A rocking chair looms above the vague mass, draped with lacy cobwebs. |
| On the floor next to it are crumpled a cardigan and skirt covering bones shrink-wrapped with dried-down flesh. | On the floor next to it are crumpled a cardigan and skirt covering bones shrink-wrapped with dried-down flesh. | ||
| Mingling from the nearness, another curled lump of bones lies dusted with disintegrating dog hair like dandelion seeds rotting on the stem. | Mingling from the nearness, another curled lump of bones lies dusted with disintegrating dog hair like dandelion seeds rotting on the stem. | ||
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